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Cry for Deliverance by ~slayerstephi:iconslayerstephi:



Take me out of Hell,
away from this pain.
Let oppression fail,
let devastation wane.

Make my sorrows lessen,
take away my fears.
Fight away the demons,
wipe away the tears.

Shine your light of glory
in the darkened street.
With your holy water
wash my swollen feet.

Lay me in your bed,
requiem sempiternam.
Where you send me dreams,
quietis memoriam.
©2006-2009 ~slayerstephi
:iconslayerstephi:

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This just came to me when some mentioned this being hell. Had a little trouble figuring what rhymes with "sempiternam" though.

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:iconslayerstephi:
Thank you very much. :D

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconviolentpurge09:
Good job love... Perfecto
:iconslayerstephi:
Thanks :D

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconhunter7160:
nice poem! ill be honest, i didnt understand some of the words, but of what i understood, i liked it. and nice job w/ the ryming, too. lol :meditate:
:icondevildreamt:
It reminds me of a cat.

--
Steal away my heat, my life
take all away and cast it below
that I may soar with you,
upon your wings
into the endless light.
I am the wind
:iconjedfire:
i like it a lot, especially the Latin (and of course the tight rhymescheme :) )

--
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#Jingulus
#FlashMob
:iconslayerstephi:
Thanks. I'm presuming that the words you didn't understand are the latin words. No sweat there, not many will understand them.

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<

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