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It has been a while
since I've seen Him,
since I have been with Him,
had Him.
Too long.
So long that it gave me nightmares.
I lay in bed
waiting to fall asleep,
for the next horrific dream.
I finally fall asleep.

Everything is black,
until suddenly
I'm in a great room.
There He is
standing in front of me,
smiling,
as He is just as happy to see me
as I am to see Him.
I hold him close,
and kiss him.

Then I look up
to see a good witch
battling a demon.
The demon comes down to us,
the decomposing head of a beast,
and devours my love.
Then it stares at me
with its bloodstained mouth
and snarrels
as if it was about to do the same to me.

I woke up.
It was about four AM.
I lay in bed
dreading to sleep again.
There would be more nightmares.
Each would show me His demise.
I cry after an hour.
I fear it would be too long till I had Him.
There is only one cure:
To have Him and be satisfied.
Inspired by a dream I had.
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originalkitten Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty awesome writing hun!
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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originalkitten Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yw :)
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EarthMother4742 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2006
Oh, that's so beautiful... Wish I had dreams like that... can never remember mine.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
The vividness it is good. Can't say the same for the subject all the time.
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nny777slavelabor Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2006
very emotional
its quite nice :)
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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nny777slavelabor Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2006
my pleasure
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bluegarnet Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
:clap: good job, good poem. :)
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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blackeyelinr27 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2005   Writer
it's good, thanks for saying mine is good.
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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blackeyelinr27 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2005   Writer
it's good, thanks for saying mine is good.
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musicsadyingart Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
very well put together. great job. the imagery was perfect. let's hope that i don't have nightmares because of this.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure you will, I mean won't. :)
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SilentMalevolence Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2005   Writer
I was readin through, and this one just..touched me for some reason. It's deep and..wow.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. It honestly was a nightmare I had the night before. Actually, in the dream I became the witch and battled the demon myself. Haven't figured out the meaning of it yet.:shrug:
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SilentMalevolence Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2005   Writer
I used to do dream interpretations, but I gave up on it when I was having to interpret my own nightmares. Not so fun to crack open your own head and have a peek. It's a really great piece, though.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean. I always have dreams, but I don't usually have nightmares. I honestly think it is saying something. Oh well, if something bad happens along those lines, then there I go. Thanks again.
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Bi-polarBear Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2005   Photographer
Wow.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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