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To My Mother by ~slayerstephi:iconslayerstephi:

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My dearest mother, don't you cry,
we'll find a way to make you fly.
We'll mend your wings with heart felt words,
you will fly higher than the birds.

Let rain from heaven wash your tears,
let sunlight fight away your fears.
I'm there in every star you see,
I'll be there as you were for me.

Now take each step and day with light
until you spread your wings in flight.
My mother, you are dear to me,
the mother I would hope to be.
©2006-2009 ~slayerstephi
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This is the poem I wrote for my mom for Mother's Day.
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~Koppo:iconKoppo: May 14, 2006, 8:09:29 PM
awesome.Heartfelt,and feels very personal.Good work Stephi

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I Don't Need No Help,I Can Do Bad on My OwN
Leave Me Lonely,Like You Did Last Time...
~0-Akasha-0:icon0-Akasha-0: May 14, 2006, 8:11:14 PM
aaaw that's so sweet :D

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:headbang:
~slayerstephi:iconslayerstephi: May 14, 2006, 8:13:04 PM
Thanks for faving it.

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
~slayerstephi:iconslayerstephi: May 14, 2006, 8:13:16 PM
Thanks. :D

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
~Koppo:iconKoppo: May 14, 2006, 8:31:54 PM
yw.

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I Don't Need No Help,I Can Do Bad on My OwN
Leave Me Lonely,Like You Did Last Time...
~BattousaiTim:iconBattousaiTim: May 14, 2006, 8:51:55 PM
The ending of the poem certainly did show that you are determined to lead a great life and keep the chain going as your family lineage continues, showing a line of great mothers. ^_^ There are few mothers out there that sound as awesome as yours ^_^ not saying mine is great, but of course...XD;;; I can't be a mother!

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"Alex, you know you shouldn't molest her things when she's standing right next to you!!!"

-From Lunar: Silver Star Story Complete
~slayerstephi:iconslayerstephi: May 14, 2006, 9:04:22 PM
Thanks. It also hits at my mother's current situation in the first and second stanzas.

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
~Cosmic-Witch:iconCosmic-Witch: May 15, 2006, 6:23:30 AM
very beautiful ur mothers gonna love it.
~Phantom-Lover:iconPhantom-Lover: May 15, 2006, 10:37:18 AM
Wonderfully written! You're mother must be very lucky to have a daughter who cares so much about her!

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~poof~
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