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My dearest mother, don't you cry,
we'll find a way to make you fly.
We'll mend your wings with heart felt words,
you will fly higher than the birds.

Let rain from heaven wash your tears,
let sunlight fight away your fears.
I'm there in every star you see,
I'll be there as you were for me.

Now take each step and day with light
until you spread your wings in flight.
My mother, you are dear to me,
the mother I would hope to be.
This is the poem I wrote for my mom for Mother's Day.
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lilmegs16 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
I bet your mom really liked it I do
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for faving it. And she loved it. :)
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EarthMother4742 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006
That's very well written. Wish I could have written something as good as that for my mom. Awesome work!
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D Your poetry is awesome though.
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EarthMother4742 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006
:aww: Thank you!!
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :D
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anarchy-chicken Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006   Writer
I'm there in every star you see,
I'll be there as you were for me.

Wonderful words, I shall fave this
the end was really good too, there are parts of the beginning I would consider reworking but it's not necessary if you don't want to
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I don't what would be revised though. Would you please tell me what you would revise?
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anarchy-chicken Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006   Writer
the fourth line, Iuno it kinda bugs me somehow, mebbe if u reword wut u've got, or even use a whole other word instead of birds for ur subject, like hurt or something, lol but of course if ur happy with it leave it as it is
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I am happy with it. I was just curious what you would have changed.
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WhiteLadyoftheForest Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2006  Professional Artisan Crafter
I think this poem is just so heart felt and generous on the giving side you have for your dear Mom. I like it my self. but sadly my own Mom is not the lopving giving type, I am very much that way with my kids and they are very close to me and I to my husband. so even though I did not personally have a loving family life when I grew up I desired it emensley and made it happen in my own marriage and loved my children dearly. I really liked this poem of your dear feelings of your mother and wanting her to be free of her un happyness and difficult life that is some times to much for her to handle alone. i can feel she really appreciates you and how much you give her freely of your heart and support on what ever may come her way in hr life. I pray all will become better for her and you are able to do more for her than you are.

Hugs,
Andrea

I hope I have not over steped my boundries on you. if I have sorry, I will backoff.
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
No, you didn't over step your boundries. Thank you for taking the time to comment and faving the poem.
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WhiteLadyoftheForest Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2006  Professional Artisan Crafter
Your welcome.
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originalkitten Featured By Owner May 22, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that is so beautiful!
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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originalkitten Featured By Owner May 24, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yw xox
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VampireButterflyMel Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww, steph, so appropriate for mothers' day, your mom must have loved it!
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. She did. :D
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Ruskul Featured By Owner May 16, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^.^ aww so cute ... ... ... ... ... -cries-
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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allisonm Featured By Owner May 15, 2006   Interface Designer
You can leave this yes or no or not answer if you prefer:

Is she sick?
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
No, depressed though because of some family trouble.
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allisonm Featured By Owner May 16, 2006   Interface Designer
Gotcha.
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Phantom-Lover Featured By Owner May 15, 2006
Wonderfully written! You're mother must be very lucky to have a daughter who cares so much about her!
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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Phantom-Lover Featured By Owner May 15, 2006
You're Welcome
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LadyPeruch Featured By Owner May 15, 2006  Professional General Artist
very beautiful ur mothers gonna love it.
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. She did love it. :)
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BattousaiTim Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
The ending of the poem certainly did show that you are determined to lead a great life and keep the chain going as your family lineage continues, showing a line of great mothers. ^_^ There are few mothers out there that sound as awesome as yours ^_^ not saying mine is great, but of course...XD;;; I can't be a mother!
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 14, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. It also hits at my mother's current situation in the first and second stanzas.
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BattousaiTim Featured By Owner May 15, 2006
Whoops XD;;; I meant to say that I wasn't saying my mother is NOT great. She's a good mother ^_^ but it's things like that I always seem to mess up with. ><;;; Maybe I should go back to english. XDDD;;;
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't think she wasn't great from your comment.
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0-Akasha-0 Featured By Owner May 14, 2006  Professional General Artist
aaaw that's so sweet :D
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:iconslayerstephi:
slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 14, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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Koppo Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
awesome.Heartfelt,and feels very personal.Good work Stephi
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slayerstephi Featured By Owner May 14, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for faving it.
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Koppo Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
yw.
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